Friday, May 13, 2011

Persuasive Essay

Which essay persuaded you the most?

Write 2 questions that about each persuasive essay and make sure to include the name of the essay.
Questions should be either about something that confuses you or something you want more information added ab out.

24 comments:

  1. Burger King:
    Do you think if you ask them to make the burgers free they will say yes? If they say yes will you tell the poor burgers are free now?

    No Xbox:
    Why won't you ask them to fix em?If they fix em will you be happy and let people buy em?

    No Talking: I go with not talking because I'm trying to not talk.Why wont you add how to stop talking in it?Who are you telling not to talk to?

    Another Dog:
    Do you want to buy the same type of dog you already have? Do you want to take your new dog(if you get one) to a pet academy?

    Free Video Games:
    What would you do if they say no to your command? Will be fine or force them to?

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  2. if buger king was free they go out of buisnessan that won't be good?

    if Xbox 360 was fixed it would be better? but if you buy it it still might freeze?

    if there was no talking we wil be like the queen in the play we would nevere laugh. but it will make the teacher happy?
    if you a another dog it might hassle? it might make a lot of noise?



    what will you do when they runs out games to make? will that be fun?

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  3. No XBOX

    What would peolple do if they liked XBOX and want to play it?

    Another dog

    What would happen if they made a mess while you were gone?

    Burger King

    What if they ran out of money?

    NO TALKING

    How would we talk in a group project?

    Free video games

    How they pay for store bill

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  4. Burger king persauded me the most because i like burger king

    Burger king if there burgers were free you wouldn't be enough to buy?
    Another dog
    if there was only dogs in the world it would be very loud? would you be able to handle that?

    no Xbox360
    if Xbox 360 was fixed you can buy it. Do you won't to pay?

    no talking
    if there was no talking there wouldn't
    there be jokes.

    if there was free video games wouldn't less people get money?

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  5. burger king: if they were free everybody would want one and there woudn't be enough money to pay for the bills

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  6. free videogames
    how will we make money?

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  7. No Talking: why does she keep saying it is BAD BAD BAD!!!!

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  8. Burger King essay persuaded me the most.

    Burger King Why should burger king have free cheeseburgers?

    No Xbox Why does Xbox cost so much money?

    No talking why would no talking help us?

    Anthother dog Why should we have another dog because the dog is loud

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  9. anther dog anspier me by going evey were.
    1. when you have time do you play with him/her.
    2. did you need glasses.
    3.then how are there gona by buger.
    4.what happens if it an experemernt.

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  10. No Talking persuaded me the most

    NO XBOX

    what will you do if some people don't have any thing to do and they are board ?

    ANOTHER DOG

    What will I do if the dogs fight ?

    BURGER KING
    WHAT IF THEY RUN OUT OF MONEY AND BUISENESS

    FREE VIDEO GAMES

    what if no one buys them any more

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  11. NO Xbox: why does he mean by The controller is too big for a tiny toddler????

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  12. burger king - how are they expensive?

    NO TALKING - HOW IS IT BAD?

    NO XBOX - HOW IS IT BAD?

    ANTHOR DOG - WHY DO YOU WANT ANTHOR DOG?

    FREE VIDEO GAMES - WHY SHOULD THEY BE FREE VIDEO GAMES?

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  13. Another Dog: why is your dog so lonley????

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  14. free video games i like how video games could be free but could the systims be free two?

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  15. burger king:
    what about chicken nuggets

    another dog:
    how would you take care of all those dogs?

    no talking:
    how would you ask the teacher questions?

    no xbox:
    how would the game store make money?

    free video games:
    how would the game store make money?

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  16. Burger King

    How would the owner get money to pay for bills?

    No xbox

    Would if you love xbox?

    No Talking

    How would people communicate?

    Another Dog

    The dogs will make a mess while your gone?

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  17. What will you do if Buger King runs out of buisnessan and you can never eat there again.

    What will you play with if your other game staions didn't egzist.

    You shouldn't talk when you are not asked to because you could get in trouble if you keep doing it.

    you shouldn't get another dog because they would be twice the work.

    you shouldn't get free games because that compiny would run out of buiseeness.

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  18. Free video Games: why do you keep saying i like them and keep saying they should be free over and over again.

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  19. Burger king:
    it makes me hungry

    no talking:
    is good because you won't get in trouble

    no XBOX: is good so it won't hurt your eyes

    another dog:is good because you have more fun

    free video games: is bad you won't get money

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  20. ANTHER DOG WHY DO WANT ANTHER DOG



    NO XBOX WHY CANT YOU FIX IT


    BURGER KING WILL IT STAY IN BUINESNESS

    NO TALKING WHY DO YOU WANT NO TALKING

    FREE VIDEO GAMES IS IT AT ALL STORES

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  21. The free video game persuasive essay persuaded me the most.

    NO XBOX
    Is there any other more specific reason for not playing xbox?

    Burger King
    Is there any other specific thing that you like about the Burger King cheeseburger?

    No Talking
    What punishment will you get if you get in trouble?

    Dog
    By lonely do you mean does she want another dog near you or does she want you by her side always?

    Free Video Games
    Could there be any other facts are that are more specific that could be added to this paragraph?

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  22. Burger King- Why do they cost so much?

    NO TALKING!- Are there any other reasons we should stop talking?

    NO XBOX- Why should there be no existance in xboxes anymore?

    Another Dog- Why else would you want another dog?

    Free Video Games- Why is having free video games a bad thing to the sellers?

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  23. Burger king why is their food cost so mutch?
    x box why does it freeese so much?
    no talkig why would it help us?
    another dog would it be more fun?
    freevideo games would we be board ?

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  24. Burger King What about the chicken?

    NO TALKING How will you ask the teacher questions?

    NO XBOX What about the people that like Xbox?

    Another dog How would you do your homework if you have to take care of two dogs?

    Free Video games How will the store make money?

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